英语翻译您好,我的朋友马上就要回老家过年了,我怕过几天联系不上他所以拜托他今天帮我付款了.麻烦检查下看看有没有收到款项,一共是XXX美金,付款账号是OOO.您不用急着包装,请慢慢来.希望这次交易顺利!

Dear XXX
Hello,sorry to disturb you.My friend is about to go home for new year.I am afarid that i counld't reach him for couple of days so I let him pay the money today.
please check if you have receive the money ,it will be XXX dollar in all
and the payment account is OOO.
There is no need to be rush,you can take your time to wrap the package.
Thank you very much for your patience and understanding.Hope this bussiness can go well!

不想说其他的，一楼回答的，没有ask him to the payment for me 的说法
2楼不成句，语意也不通。。。建议采纳三楼的。。和我的答案，不要被坑了。。生意是要严谨的做的。不可以出错！

Hello, my friend will be back home have the Spring Festival, I am afraid that a few days can not contact him so please help me pay him today. Trouble check have a look have not received the money, a total of $XXX, payment account number is OOO.
You don't have to hurry to packing, please take it easy. Thank you very much, hope that this transaction!

Dear Sir/Madam,
My friend will soon be leaving for his hometown to celebrate the Sprig Festival. I'm afraid that I will not be able to reach him in a few days so I asked him to pay the payment for me today. Please check if you have received the payment, totally XXX USD, the account isOOO. Please take your time! No hurry wraping. Thank you very much! I wish this is a successful business!

Hi,
My friend is going hometown for spring festival no sooner, I am afraid that I will lose the contact with him. So I ask him to pay for me today. Would you please have a check whether you have received the fund, the total is xxxx US Dollars, the payment account number is OOOO.
It's no necessary to package in hurry, you can do it slowly.
Thanks very much, and hope a successful trade this time.

你好，很高兴可以为你解答问题。
您好，
我的朋友马上就要回老家过年了，我怕过几天联系不上他所以拜托他今天帮我付款了。麻烦检查下看看有没有收到款项，一共是XXX美金，付款账号是OOO。
您不用急着包装，请慢慢来。
非常感谢，希望这次交易顺利!
Dear Sir/Madam,
My friend is going to leave here to gome back his/her homeland to celebrate the Chinese New Year. I am afraid that I can't contect him for a few day, so I asked him to the payment for me today.Please check if you have recevied to payment, total is $XXX, the payment account is OOO.
You may not hurry in wraping, just take your time. Thank you very much and wish this business wil be sucessful!
满意的话，请采纳，谢谢

Hello,
One of my friend is coming back hometown for The spring festival, I asked him to pay for that because I am afraid I will not be able to be contact with him. Please check if you have already received the payments, $**** in total. the Paypal Account is 000000.
Please take all the time you need to pack him.
Thank you, hopefully, this is going to be a sucessful transaction.

Hello,
My friend is going back home for the spring festival in days,in case that I lose touch with him,so I asked him to pay the money for me today,Please check it out that if you recive the money,total XXX US dollars,paying account OOO.
You don't have to pack the goods right away,just take your time.
And thanks very much,hope we can have smooth deal.

Hello,
My friend will be back home for Spring Festival soon and I'm afaid I can not contact him that time,so I requested him to help my payment today.Please check if you have recived.a sum of $xxx,and the account is ooo.
Don't be anxious to pack,take it easy.
Thank you very much,hope we have had a favoring deal!