In this year it's 2012 dragon year also is my year.SO I must be demtermined to do few things.the first is learn english well and pass the test.the sconed is steady my job and make my parents ressuring.ok rest is no turning back!帮我看看写的是否合理帮我修改修改

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In this year it's 2012 dragon year also is my year.SO I must be demtermined to do few things.
the first is learn english well and pass the test.the sconed is steady my job and make my parents ressuring.ok rest is no turning back!帮我看看写的是否合理帮我修改修改