i hope i am able to see your happy smile on your face.这句英语有错吗i hope i am able to see your happy smile on your face when i pick you up this Friday.

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i hope i am able to see your happy smile on your face.这句英语有错吗
i hope i am able to see your happy smile on your face when i pick you up this Friday.

应该没错

没错,但个人认为把第一个“your"改成"the"会更好一些
I hope i am able to see the happy smile on your face when i pick you up this Friday.