请帮我看一下这篇作文是否有语法错误Hi,my name is ...I like listening to English songs,such as sang by Avril and Taylor Swift.English songs are very beautiful.And I think listening to them is a good way to improve my English.So,if you have some good English songs,You can share them with me .such as sang by。。这里要不要改??总觉得怪怪的

Hi, my name is .....
I like to listen to English songs; such as those sung by Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift. Because firstly English songs are beautiful songs and secondly I think that listening to them is a good way to polish my English. Thus, I'll be very happy if you share good English songs with me.
觉得这样地道一点吧 另外sing sang sung, 用在文中应该用sung

不用，正确的。只不过songs不能说beautiful

And I think listening to them is a good way to improve my English
两个谓语动词 think is 加连接词And I think that listening to them is a good way to improve my English