英语作文my school bag 用there be来写急!

I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday pesent. I like it very much.
　　My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, It's very lovely. There are many books in my bag,such as Chiese books, English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it.
　　When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it.
　　When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it.

　　我有一个漂亮的书包.它是我奶奶去年秋天给我买的生日礼物,我很喜欢它.
　　我的书包是蓝色的,蓝色是我最喜爱的颜色.在书包上面你可以看到一个小老虎,它很可爱.书包里有很多书,如语文书,英语书等等,还有一个漂亮的铅笔盒.在书包里面有一个小口袋,我常把钱和钥匙放在里面.
　　当我学习功课时,书包总和我在一起.它是我最亲密的朋友.我要好好爱护它.