改写这个句子 I told you he would receive the parcel in time.用the parcel作主语这是我改写的：I told you that the parcel would be received in time by him.或 The parcel would be received in time by him as i told you.我看网上有另一种改写方式,You were told that the parcel would be received in time by him.请问我自己改写的对吗?要是不对请指正,
问题描述：
改写这个句子 I told you he would receive the parcel in time.用the parcel作主语
这是我改写的：I told you that the parcel would be received in time by him.或 The parcel would be received in time by him as i told you.
我看网上有另一种改写方式,You were told that the parcel would be received in time by him.
请问我自己改写的对吗?要是不对请指正,
答
你改写的第二句可取,第一句或许有争议,网上的那句也可以不过没有指出“我告诉你”这一点.