由于下雪 河水结成冰 我们乘上自制的雪橇在上面滑行 感觉很刺激 等待天气暖和一点后 小河的并渐渐融化了 于是我们在小河里划船

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由于下雪 河水结成冰 我们乘上自制的雪橇在上面滑行 感觉很刺激 等待天气暖和一点后 小河的并渐渐融化了 于是我们在小河里划船

Because of snowing,the water of rivers become ice,we ride the sleighs that made by ourselves to slip on the ice.And when the weather turn to warm litter lead to the ice of river get thawing,we go boating in the river.

Owing to the snow water freezes our homemade sleigh ride on top in the taxi feeling very exciting for the warm weather after the river and then we had melted in the river

Owing to the snow,the river freezed,so we went skating with the homemade sled.It was so exciting!When it was a little warm and the frozen river gradually melted,we went boating in this small river.
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Because of the snow, the lake was frozen. We are excited about our skating on the homemade sled. When it becomes warmer, the ice on the river is melting little by little, so we are boating on the river.

专业翻译,绝对没有语法逻辑时态等楼上几位出现的错误Because of the snow,the water in the river froze.We then went sledging with a home-made sled on it which was exciting.When the weather bacame warmer,th...