这篇英语作文有什么错误?题目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母让你取得好成绩吗？你父母让你交朋友么？请以If I were a father/mother为题，写一篇作文作文： If I were a father We all must be fathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea If I were a father I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make f

这篇英语作文有什么错误?
题目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母让你取得好成绩吗？你父母让你交朋友么？请以If I were a father/mother为题，写一篇作文
作文：
If I were a father
We all must be fathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea
If I were a father I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make friends with my kid , I would play games with it,I would keep it healthy,and growing fast.If I were a father ,I wouldn't make it get so good grades,but it is not allowed to copy others.Also I would help it to make a lots of friends.
I believe if I were a father ,I would be very good