英语作文在线点评修改一下我的作文：My dream lifein the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?

In my future, I will become beautiful. I will drive to work so I would be very happy (是想说高兴吗）everyday. My parents and I will buy a big and elegant house which will have a robot inside that'll do all the dull work. On holidays, we'll visit the Sydney Opera House, it's always been my dream to visit. What is your dream life?

修改：I hope I can be more beautiful in my future.I will be very happy if I can go work by my own car everyday.I want to live in a large and elegant house with my parents.In my house , there will be a robort,it can help us to do daily housework that we don't want to do.On holidays,we'll go to Sydney Opera House,which is one of my dream.So,what about you?

1. 标题：My dream life - My life in dream
2. so I will be very happen everyday - so I will be very happy every day
3. 形容房子：big - large
4. in my home , has a robort - there is a robot in my home .
5. it will be do dull jobs everyday . - it does dull jobs every day .
6. On holiday , - At holiday ,
7. Go to there is my dream . - Going there is my dream .
此外，每句的开头字母要大写，应该注意。

My life in dream
In the future, I will be very beautiful. I will go to work by car so I will be very happy everyday. I will live in a big and elegant house with my parents. In my home, there is a robot who will do dull jobs everyday. O n holidays, we'll go to the Sydney Opera House. Going to there is my dream. What about you、

happen everyday 改为：happy every day 每天很快乐（ everyday每日的）in my home,has a robort改为：There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in m...

happen 改为happy。开车上班和天天开心好像没有什么因果关系吧。用so有点不妥。 elegant一般做优雅解不大用来修饰房子。
i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday
这句话问题较大。
I will live in a big house with my parents. There will be a robort in my home. The robort can make dulls everyday.
倒数第二句话，there是副词不要to. 动词不能直接做主语，改成
going there is my dream