麻烦帮忙检查一下是否有语法错误,或要改的地方这是要发给美国高中的admission office 的老师的Hi,Keri!Thank you for connecting the tutor for me!The earliest time that Iwill arrive here is July 10.I hope it is not too late to start the tutoringprogram.Also,I am trying to get the bank statement and I will e-mail the copy of it and my passport to you as soon as possible.Sincerely,Anni Wang
问题描述：
麻烦帮忙检查一下是否有语法错误,或要改的地方
这是要发给美国高中的admission office 的老师的
Hi,Keri!
Thank you for connecting the tutor for me!The earliest time that I
will arrive here is July 10.I hope it is not too late to start the tutoring
program.
Also,I am trying to get the bank statement and I will e-mail the copy of it and my passport to you as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
Anni Wang
答
先放入英文纠错软件易改里面过了一遍,没问题.
然后开始人工看：
大问题：
connecting the tutor for me没看懂是啥.
connect是物理连接,连通的意思,比如接上电线
人与人之间的联系是contact（你是想说这个意思么?）
小问题：
I hope it is not too late.这里真要仔细斟酌,it也是不对的,应该用that,因为你是指代“那个时间（July 10th）"
I will arrive here（here是指你现在在的地方,我估计你想说的是there?最好还是地名直接写出来）