Jane was very beautiful young girl,so she was quite1____
Jane was very beautiful young girl,so she was quite1____
used to some men show their admiration for her and 2____
others were shy when they saw her.A summer,when 3____
Jane was traveling abroad,and she went into a cafe 4____
in a small town,sat down and waited to be served.The5____
young waiter was talking to anyone at the bar when 6____
she came in,and at first he was not paid nay attention7____
to her,because he has not looked at her properly.Then8____
he turned round and saw how beautiful it was.His face9____
went brightly red,and he hurried over to take her order.10____
1 a very beautiful.少了冠词
2 who show.主语从句,不能省略who
3 when 改成 while
4 and去掉,主句和从句之间没有and
5 对
6 anyone 改为 someone
7 was not paid nay 改为paid no
8 has 改为had
9 it 改为she
10 over 改为up