请帮忙修改一句话
问题描述:
请帮忙修改一句话
整句话是:Her math teacher finally came to her as he saw her the third time of the day.
后半句似乎有问题?
答
结构没有问题,三个her有些累赘.->came up to her when they met the third time that day.好一些.