大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?

大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,能拿多少分?
大家来看看这篇初一英语作文怎么样吧,作文满分是10分,能拿多少分?
On Saturday,I am always busy.
I have breakfast at 8:00am at home.
And at 9:00am,I have piano lessons at school.
I have lunch at 12:00 in hotel.
I see a film at 3:00pm in Hongxiang Cinema.
And at 7:00pm,I watch TV at home.
I read some books at 10:00pm in my bedroom.
So I am always busy,but I like Saturday very much!
有错误请指出来
这也不能怪我啊,试卷上给了一个表,让我按照表写啊