英语把这两句话变成定语从句

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英语把这两句话变成定语从句
John is a famous doctor.
A lot of patients are very thankful to him.
我是这样改的:John that a lot of patients are very thankful to is a famous doctor.
请问这样是对的吗?

你的不对.A lot of patients are very thankful to John who is a famous doctor.为什么不对T3T不是地道英文,Local People不会这么说的。太繁琐。意群不清晰。