帮我看看有没有语法错误,I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done and I hope to have the opportunity of rewarding you.

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帮我看看有没有语法错误,
I am greatly indebted to you for what you have done and I hope to have the opportunity of rewarding you.

have the opportunity to reward you

My heartiest thanks for your help and hope to repay you in one way or anyother.

没有语法错误 但是表达上可以更好
I really appreciate what you have done for me and I wish you will offer me the chance to pay back.

Well nothing wrong to your sentences . I think is ok ... ^_^