请帮我修改一下英语作文,讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often go to the park to relaxed.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable .country life has some differences to city life.people who in the country have to work everday ,they(自己做饭种菜怎么说 - -.) by themself.If they want to visit their neighborhood ,thy

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请帮我修改一下英语作文,
讲城市和乡村生活的区别.好处坏处和共同点.
life in a city is very comfortable ,there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city .we can go anywhere by car ,taxi or bus.on weekends,we often go to the park to relaxed.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable .
country life has some differences to city life.people who in the country have to work everday ,they(自己做饭种菜怎么说 - -.) by themself.If they want to visit their neighborhood ,thy only can ride bicycle or by foot .
Through there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some (相同点怎么说 - -.) too.
共同点要写不同点,提示词 是getting better ,keeping fit
I woud like city life rather than country life,because i prefer to have a comfortable life.

1.life in a city is very comfortable , there has kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city.
(...., there are many kinds of restaurants)
2.we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relaxed.
(..., to relax (to 后接V原)
3.city life is not only very conventied but also very comfortable.
(用not only 引导倒装会更好 Not only is city life very conventied but it also very comfortable).
4. country life has some differences to city life(介词to改为from)
5.自己做饭种菜They plant and cook by themselves
6. on foot 走路
7,共同点 With the development of technology and society, life both in cities and countries are getting better. They can affoard to attend school and hospital. What's more, there are many fitness facilities for them keeping fit regularly.

life in a city is very comfortable , there are kinds of restrounds and apartments around the city 。 we can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus。 on weekends, we often go to the park to relax ourselves。city life is not only very convenient but also very comfortable 。
country life has some differences from city life。 people who in the country have to work everday ,they cook their meals(自己做饭种菜)by themself。 If they want to visit their neighborhood , they only can ride bicycle or by foot 。
Through there are many differences between city life and country life,there are some same points(相同点) too.
共同点要写不同点, 提示词 是getting better , keeping fit
I woud like city life rather than country life, because i prefer to have a comfortable life。

Life in a city is very convenient. There are various kinds of restaurants and apartments in the city . We can go anywhere by car , taxi or bus. On weekends, we can go to the park to relax. City life i...