英语,看看有语法错误吗?Ladies and gentlemen,I will sing a song with the guitar and the name of the song is "girl",I'm sure there must be such a girl in your heart that the sun burns for her,the moon rises for her and the stars blinks for her.At least I have,but she has already taken,I love her and I'm very sad.

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英语,看看有语法错误吗?
Ladies and gentlemen,I will sing a song with the guitar and the name of the song is "girl",I'm sure there must be such a girl in your heart that the sun burns for her,the moon rises for her and the stars blinks for her.At least I have,but she has already taken,I love her and I'm very sad.

没有发现语法错误哦

语法没什么问题,也好优美,可为什么读着怪怪的呢(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

Ladies and gentlemen,I will sing a song while playing the guitar.The name of the song is "girl".I'm sure there must be such a girl in your heart that the sun burns for her,the moon rises for her and t...

At least I have这句感觉怪怪的,可以说,as far as I am concerned, the answer is yes.
I'm very sad可以改为 I am in great sorrow.