帮我检查这个作文错在哪里Homework spoiled my day.Last day,I did my homework at home,but I didn't bring it to go to school.The teacher was very angry,because she didn't believe me.I went to home and tried to found my homework.I ask my mother"Where's my homework."My mother said she threw it away.Dear me.What should I do?这是我写的一篇英语作文,请好心人帮帮找找错误.可能很多,
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帮我检查这个作文错在哪里
Homework spoiled my day.Last day,I did my homework at home,but I didn't bring it to go to school.The teacher was very angry,because she didn't believe me.I went to home and tried to found my homework.I ask my mother"Where's my homework."My mother said she threw it away.Dear me.What should I do?
这是我写的一篇英语作文,请好心人帮帮找找错误.可能很多,
答
last day改为yesterday 直接bring it to school I went home I asked my mother she had thrown it away 基本语法或拼写上的错误就是这些 语调方面慢慢来不用急