帮我看看这几句英语有没有错误第一句：Items are shipped from China using Airmail,reach most of the countries within 15 to 25 business days.If you want to take over in shorter time,you can choose EMS (reach in 5-10 days),we will supply you the best freight cost,it is very economic.第二句：If you want faster delivery,you may select EMS (reaching you between 5-10 days).We will offer you the lowest charges,which you can afford.第三句：If you want to get the items earlier,you can cho
帮我看看这几句英语有没有错误
第一句：
Items are shipped from China using Airmail,reach most of the countries within 15 to 25 business days.If you want to take over in shorter time,you can choose EMS (reach in 5-10 days),we will supply you the best freight cost,it is very economic.
第二句：
If you want faster delivery,you may select EMS (reaching you between 5-10 days).We will offer you the lowest charges,which you can afford.
第三句：
If you want to get the items earlier,you can choose EMS (takes 5-10 working days).Our price is the cheapest.
第一句： Items are shipped from China using Airmail 改为 items shipped from China are using Airmail
语法错误
business days 改为 working days 工作日
supply 改为 offer 提供用这个比较好
very economic 改为 very cost-effective 划算的
第二句：faster 前面加一个 a
括号里面reaching 去掉 ing
afford 后面加个 to
第三句：没改的地方
我觉得第三句还好，其它两句有点问题！
第一句：Items are shipped from China using Airmail,which reaches most countries within 15 to 25 business days.If you want to reseive it in a shorter time,you may choose EMS (5-10 days).We will supply ...