我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,Hello,good morning.My name is Gao Yu,I'm thirteen years old.I study in Dong Guan Primary School.I'm in Grade six Class one.I like play computer and study English very much,and I often play computer games with my classmates.Noodles is my favourite food,I think it's delicious.I like the sea very much,so I like blue,too.Because the sea is blue.My English teacher is Duan Xiaoqin,she is very friendly to us,I like her very much.Th

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我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,
Hello,good morning.My name is Gao Yu,I'm thirteen years old.I study in Dong Guan Primary School.I'm in Grade six Class one.
I like play computer and study English very much,and I often play computer games with my classmates.Noodles is my favourite food,I think it's delicious.I like the sea very much,so I like blue,too.Because the sea is blue.My English teacher is Duan Xiaoqin,she is very friendly to us,I like her very much.
This is me,thank you!
我写的,看看有没有错误的地方,另发出来一份中文翻译,

I like play...study改为I like playing...studying;
Noodles改为Noodle;
早上好!我叫高群,今年13岁。我就读于东莞小学六年级一班。
我非常喜欢玩电脑和学英语。我经常和同学一起玩电脑游戏。我喜欢吃面条,我觉得面条很可口。我十分喜欢大海,因此喜欢蓝色。因为大海就是蓝色的。我的英语老师叫段小琴。她对我们非常友好,我非常喜欢她。
这就是我,谢谢!

good morning everyoneI like playing computer and learning/studying English very muchI like the blue sea very much and I like blue,too.首先想说你写的已经很好了,基本上没有什么语法错误,继续加油~大家早上...