中译英：请注意他坚持要收杰克10元这样行不行：please be noted that he insist to collect ￥10 from Jack .
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中译英：请注意他坚持要收杰克10元
这样行不行：
please be noted that he insist to collect ￥10 from Jack .
答
note作动词一般指记录下来，你这句的意思就是请把你们记录下来...
可以用一个很简单的短语pay attention to.
还有insist的用法也不对，应该是insist on sth.
更好的翻法：
Please pay attention to the fact that he insisted on collecting ￥10 from Jack.
或者
Please give your attention to the fact that he insisted on collecting ￥10 from Jack.
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Please pay attention to that he insisted on asking Jack for 10 dollors. (在国外)
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please be noted that he insist on collecting ￥10 from Jack .
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Please note that he insist charging 10 yuan from Jack.
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Please note he insisted to Jack 10 yuan
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觉得楼主的说法不错，Insist应该用过去时
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你翻译的很好啊。charge感觉更与insist的语态更符合一点，也显得更强硬！
Vicky