这篇读后感《潘德尔的巫师》的语法有错吗?

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这篇读后感《潘德尔的巫师》的语法有错吗?
17th century English related witchcraft superstition is extremely serious,many everybody because are accused but to suffer in vain forthe sorcerer the fatal disaster.This small story is Zhan Nite abouther whole family pitiful bitter experience narration.Zhan Nie specially told this story the time is in 1634,at that time her onlythen 9 years old,because are actually accused to im* for the sorceress in the Lancaster castle jail.Before this her maternal grandmother,the mother and elder brother are all treated as the sorcerer to execute.

你能把中文打给我,我来帮你中译英怎么样?这语法貌似错的比较多一点.