点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
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点评一篇英语作文.一篇初三的作文,内容基本已经写完整了,希望找出哪里有语法错误,和需要修改的地方
Idol
My idol is a strong man who names John Cena.He is the WWE's signature players,but also an excellent actor and singer.
He always says,'Never give up'.And he has done everything to comply with this sentence.That's why he did not experience the legendary and illustrious origin,but the tough guy with unremitting efforts have been today.
I think 'Never give up' is the main thing that I can learn from him.
上面是我写的作文,内容不要改变,希望找出不通顺的帮我修改修改,还有语法错误等.把修改的写出来.
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My IdolMy idol is a strong man whose name is John Cena. He is not only the WWE's signature players, but also an excellent actor and singer.He always says, 'Never give up'. ...