Many people think studying abroad can help them to learn the native language better and know different kinds of the cult

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Many people think studying abroad can help them to learn the native language better and know different kinds of the culture.It will help them to find a good job easily.So from 2002 to the past three years,much more middle students study abroad.In March,2008,the investigation said,thirty percent of the middle school students in Beijing wanted to study abroad.I think studying abroad is really useful.But it's too expensive.If we work hard,wherever we study in,we will also learn well.There're many ways to get a good job.Just try your best to study.
偶自己写的...哪写地方有问题,..改的好的有追加!

1"help them to learn ”的“TO”可以省略
2 “wherever we study in”去掉“IN”