请帮我一下：初二英语作文改错,请找出里面的错句.感激不尽!My hobbiesEverybocly both has their hobbies.How about mine?Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle playing teenins、and every day.I play them with my friend.I think play them is tired but very exciting and good for our health.Do you like play them?I think most people both like them.What about you hobbies?Can you tell me?

Everybody both has their hobbies.both错,应该删去；their错,应该用his/her
Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle playing teenins、and every day
这句话第一个顿号应该改成逗点,riding bicycle中间不应该有my,riding bicycle和playing tennis应该用and相连,every day前面的顿号和and应该去掉；
I play them with my friend 此处them指代不明,应该改为the games
I think play them is tired but very exciting and good for our health 这句话think后面应该加that,play应该改为playing
Do you like play them?此处play应该改为playing
I think most people both like them.此句应该改为l think most people like them both.
What about you hobbies?Can you tell me?此句第一句中的about应该改为are