请大家帮我看看这个英语句子有没问题If you want freedom,that's fine because I will give you.If I don't give freedom to you that's no good for me.

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请大家帮我看看这个英语句子有没问题
If you want freedom,that's fine because I will give you.If I don't give freedom to you that's no good for me.

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If you want to be free,fine,I'll give it to you.I am not a bad guy since I will give you the freedom.

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太累赘啦。不用把中文的因为直译到英语了。
If you want freedom, that is fine. I will give it to you. I will be a bad person if I don't give you any freedom.

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没有

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如果你想要*，那很好，我也会给你*。如果我不给你*，对我自己也没有好处。

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后面应该为there is no good for me

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中国人还是看的懂的==

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关联词太多，而且有重复，看起有点别扭，我懂你的意思：你想*，我会给你，如果我不给，我就没有好下场。
我帮你修改下：If you want freedom,ok, I will give it to you, promise, If I don't, I‘ll be punished.

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有问题，首先整个句子怪怪的，然后前部分是两个句子没有连词，中式英语

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good是形容词，不能与no连用。

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没问题

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这句句子没问题，语法没问题。

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你能说一下你表达的汉语意思吗?