能帮我看一下这句话有错吗?Last month,on Sina Weibo,posts related to "Carrier style" were followed by more than 8 million users in one days.主要是那个were,不知道该不该去掉

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能帮我看一下这句话有错吗?
Last month,on Sina Weibo,posts related to "Carrier style" were followed by more than 8 million users in one days.
主要是那个were,不知道该不该去掉

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In last month,on Sina Weibo,posts related to "Carrier style" have been followed by more than 8 million users in one days好些