帮忙修改下英语作文,内容也好,语法也好,标点符号什么都好,有什么槽尽管吐吧……When I went to senior high school ,I thought I met the largest problem in my life .There are few people I knew,and the worse was the heavy schoolwork .Half a term later,I found myself in the exact same spot as I was before.In a long time,I ask myself “What are you doing?” But there wasn’t any clue .It seemed that everything had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.Luckily,my family found these in time.They advis
帮忙修改下英语作文,内容也好,语法也好,标点符号什么都好,有什么槽尽管吐吧……
When I went to senior high school ,I thought I met the largest problem in my life .
There are few people I knew,and the worse was the heavy schoolwork .Half a term later,I found myself in the exact same spot as I was before.In a long time,I ask myself “What are you doing?” But there wasn’t any clue .It seemed that everything had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.
Luckily,my family found these in time.They advised me to find my own rhythm.It calmed me down and I began to consider my life carefully.
And then,things began to fall into place.I thought I was just like a butterfly trapped in its cocoon,waiting to emerge.
Maybe my rhythm is very slowly,but I decide to enjoy it with all my energy.
同意3楼的说法
其实很高水准。
When I went to senior high school ，I thought I met the biggest problem in my life .
There are few people I knew, and the worse was the heavy schoolwork .Half a term later, I found myself in the exact same spot as I was before.For a long time, I asked myself “What are you doing?” But there wasn’t any clue .It seemed that everything had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.
Luckily, my family found what my problem was in time. They advised me to find my own rhythm. It calmed me down and I began to consider my life carefully.
And then, things began to fall into place. I thought I was just like a butterfly trapped in its cocoon, waiting to emerge.
Maybe my rhythm is very slowly, but I decide to enjoy it with all my energy.
你的基本功很扎实，读着很通顺。
When I came to my senior high school at beginning ，it seemed that I had a big problem in my life.There were few people I knew at the first palce, and the worst was the heavy schoolwork which I never had before. After half a term study, I found myself in the exact same spot as I was in the beginning. Then I ask myself, “What are you doing?” But I had no any clear clue. It appeared that I had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.
Luckily, my parents found my problems on time. They advised me to find my own rhythm in my study and life. It helped me to calm down and I began to consider my life carefully.
Since then, things began to fall into place. I thought I was just like a butterfly trapped in its cocoon, waiting to emerge.
Maybe my rhythm is a bit slow, but it is on the right track. I decide to enjoy it in confidence with all my energy.
没错！有这功夫还不如自己改实惠。
有了senior就可以不用high了,I found myself was in the exact same spot where I was before ,
clue 换成 respond 我觉得比较好诶 had lost 用的怪怪的,改成lost吧.my family found the problem 比较好 consider my life 改一下吧.slowly是副词,用在这不对哦,应该是slow
有这打字的功夫，自己都改了