英语演讲稿的开头打招呼我要演讲的是神笔马良的故事,开头这样说好不好：Hello,everyone,my name is Barry,I am Class xx,Grade X.I am really happy I can stand here.today I 'll tell a story This is a really old Chinese story.It named"Ma Liang with his Magical Brush".那个高手能帮我改改,别太深奥,我才初二最好与人教版同步,不足敬意,
问题描述：
英语演讲稿的开头打招呼
我要演讲的是神笔马良的故事,开头这样说好不好：
Hello,everyone,my name is Barry,I am Class xx,Grade X.I am really happy I can stand here.today I 'll tell a story This is a really old Chinese story.It named"Ma Liang with his Magical Brush".
那个高手能帮我改改,别太深奥,我才初二最好与人教版同步,不足敬意,
答
开头不要用hello,太中式了。用be going to do sth,不用will。时间不紧密。
good morning everybody. my name is XXX, I am from Class XX Grade XX. it's so happy to stand here giving you the speech. I'm going to tell you a great story of Old chinese. ............
答
对于你的个人信息我没有什么特别意见.我一般说：It's my great honor to stand here to give a speech.My topic is about a story named.