帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦

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帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦
这是一篇关于介绍如何戒烟的文章的结尾段.个人感觉写的太少了,希望各位能再帮我加两句话或者修改一下,让结尾更好些````谢啦
After reading the essay,have you built up a big confidence about stopping smoking successfully?Would you want to live a healthier life in the future?Just try to quit smoking whatever obstacles you meet,just tell yourself I can do it!Just remember “nobody ever died from giving up smoking."

After reading this passage,and as a high school student,I,togetther myfriends volunteered on a campaign to discourage public smoking bypersuacling people in public places to extinguish their cigarette...