改个作文~四级题目的作文,只要检查有无语法错误就可~没有财富了!抱歉T T

改个作文~四级题目的作文,只要检查有无语法错误就可~没有财富了!抱歉T T
也请不要乱改,因为快要四级考试了,但是我作文还是比较烂.感激不敬!
studying abroad at low age
studying abroad at law age has become a hot topic among people.Nowadays,many parents think that the studying abroad is benefit to kids' future.
But,different people have different opinions on this phenomenon.Some people tend to the opinion that studying abroad at low age is not good thing,because kids may be much diffcultly in adpating oneself to live in different cultures.Kids haven't ability of independence.However,other people hold a different point of view.They think that studying abroad at low age is a good thing.First,studying abroad can cultivate kids' independence and broaden kids' vision.Secondly,studying abroad can accumlate their experience.Finally,studying abroad can enhance their competitiveness.When they come back,they need't worry about their jobs.
As far as i concerned,i'd like to agree with latter opinion.If parents have enough money,i think it's a good choice for children study in abroad,because abroad have good education and pleasent environment of life.