这两句英文,请问哪句正确,朋友们帮忙看看?我想把时间改成14号下午,帮忙更正下,包括有错误的地方,一,I have something specially to do.So I have to go home on 2014/1/14.I
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这两句英文,请问哪句正确,朋友们帮忙看看?我想把时间改成14号下午,帮忙更正下,包括有错误的地方,一,I have something specially to do.So I have to go home on 2014/1/14.I will go back to work on 2014/2/10.If there are something or work I need to do.Please tell my leader Peter/Steven to let me do.Happy new year!Thank you very much!
二,Due to some special personal affairs,i will bring forward the date of going back to hometown to January14th,2014,and i will not get back to my work untill February 10th.Anyone with relevant bussiness can contact my superior Peter or Steven for arrangement.Happy New Year in advance.（这里的and i will not,not是不是多余的）
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显然第二的好多了.not不多于.至于下午,就别加了.bring forward the date是指一天,不是一个时刻.