语法问题Many parents don't allow their children watching TV while they are doing their homework这句话错在哪里?

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语法问题Many parents don't allow their children watching TV while they are doing their homework
这句话错在哪里?

they 指的是谁啊
前面主语是 Many parents 而后面你要说的是 their children 做作业
所以吧 换一下主语

allow their chidren to watch

应改成:
Many parents don't allow their children to watch TV while they are doing their homework.
很多家长不同意他们的孩子正在做功课的时候看电视.
而不是 正在看电视的时候正在做功课.
就像 he rang when i was chatting online =]