帮我改下英语作文,改完后评价一下我的作文水平怎样?我很想提高自己的水平Should euthanasia be legalized in china?Euthanasia is a controversial word with its appearance .Many people applaud and argue that euthanasia should be legalized.As far as I know not only the china but also others counties have been used euthanasia in side of medicine and punishment.This phenomenon can remind us that euthanasia should be legalized so as to people use it more model.Firstly,as the name implies,euthanas

帮我改下英语作文,改完后评价一下我的作文水平怎样?我很想提高自己的水平
Should euthanasia be legalized in china?
Euthanasia is a controversial word with its appearance .Many people applaud and argue that euthanasia should be legalized.As far as I know not only the china but also others counties have been used euthanasia in side of medicine and punishment.This phenomenon can remind us that euthanasia should be legalized so as to people use it more model.
Firstly,as the name implies,euthanasia is a quiet and easy death.To practice the euthanasia can benefit both the patient and family.I think use the euthanasia for the patient who is hopeless case is humanity,it can reduce the patient’s pain and family’s pressure.But euthanasia should be legalized,if person abuse it,it would harm to people live,which is very dangerous.
Second,euthanasia is widely use in side of punishment.Criminal also have human right.Many criminal commit a crime is out of their will.Euthanasia can fear to the criminal.And I know we have practiced euthanasia in punishment.We should legalize it and made our society more harmonious.
To sum up,every thing have two sides,The important is how we practice it,about the euthanasia I suppose legalize it and draw up some laws to make more model