十万火急!求好心人帮我改下今晚英语演讲比赛的稿子Good evening,ladies and gentleman(房间里大概只有两个女评委,一个男摄像师）.I'm Cylin,today,I'd like to talk about wealth.Speaking of wealth,it reminds me a story I've ever heard.There was a youngman who was born in a poor family,he always complain about the unfair fate,till one day.he met and oldman."Youngman,you have such abundant wealth,why you are still full of grievance?""Wealth?Don't tease me!Where is it?""Your eyes,as long as you give it to

Good evening,everyone! My name is Cylin, and my topic today is about wealth.
Speaking of wealth, it reminds me a story I've heard before.
There was a young man who was born in a poor family,what makes he always complains about the unfair fate. Till one day, he met an strange old man .The man said to him,
"Young man, you have such abundant wealth, why are you still full of grievance?"
"Wealth?Don't tease me! Where is it?" Strangely,the young man said.
"Your eyes, as long as you give it to me, I'll promise you with whatever you want.'
"No" Answered the young man firmly, "I will not give up my eyes for anything!"
“Well,how about I take your hands instead?"
"Neither will I want to lose my hands."Cried the young man.
Then, the old man smiled and said, "Now that you have your eyes, you could study, you possess a pair of hands, you could work. Do you see your wealth now?"
This story enlightened me that we all possess wealth in a way,Actually,. we all own the wealth since we are born.The most important things is how much effort we have made.A wealthy life is made what we owned deserve its value. The biggest wealth we have is ourselves.We should enjoy ourselves and be content to what we have.Do you think?
要简单易懂不要太片面追求书本化。

Good evening, ladies and gentleman(房间里大概只有两个女评委，一个男摄像师）.I'm Cylin, today, I'd like to talk about wealth.
Speaking of wealth, it reminds me a story I've ever heard.
There was a youngman who was born in a poor family,he always complain about the unfair fate,till one day.he met and oldman.
"Youngman, you have such abundant wealth, why you are still full of grievance?"
"Wealth?Don't tease me! Where is it?"
"Your eyes, as long as you give it to me, I'll give you whatever you want.'
"No" Answered the youngman firmly,"How can I lose my sight!"(这句话是否有点CHINGLISH?")
“Well,how about take your pair of hands instead?"
"Neither can I lose my hands."Cried the youngman.
Then, the oldman smiled."Now that you owned tow eyes,you could study, you possessed a pair of hands, you could work.Have you seen your wealth now?"(这句话是否有点怪）
The story just enlightened me.Actually,. we all own the wealth since we own the life,but the point is how much effort we paid.A wealthy life is make what we owned deserve its value（这句感觉也有点...).The biggest wealth we have is we ourselves

Speaking of wealth, it reminds me a story I've ever heard.
There was a youngman who was born in a poor family,he always complained about his unfair fate,till one day,he met an oldman.
"Youngman, you have such abundant wealth, why do you still have full of grievance?"
"Wealth?Don't tease me! Where is it?"
"Your eyes, as long as you give it to me, I'll give you whatever you want.'
"No" Answered the youngman firmly,"How can I lose it?"
“Well,how about your hands?"
"Neither can I lose my hands."Cried the youngman.
Then, the oldman smiled."you owned two eyes,you could study.You possessed hands, you could work.Have you seen what your own?"
This story enlightens me so much.Actually,. we have owned the wealth since we have own the life,but the point is how much effort we pay.A wealthy life is to make what we deserve its value.The biggest wealth we have is ourselves.

Good evening, ladies and gentleman. My name is Cylin, and my topic for today is wealth.
Speaking of wealth, it reminds me a story I've heard before.
There was a young man who was born in a poor family. Everyday he always complains about the unfair fate. Till one day, he met an old man who said to him,
"Young man, you have such abundant wealth, why are you still full of grievance?"
"Wealth?Don't tease me! Where is it?"
"Your eyes, as long as you give it to me, I'll promise you with whatever you want.'
"No" Answered the young man firmly, "I will not give up my eyes for anything!"
“Well,how about I take your hands instead?"
"Neither will I want to lose my hands."Cried the young man.
Then, the old man smiled and said, "Now that you have your eyes, you could study, you possess a pair of hands, you could work. Do you see your wealth now?"
This story had enlightened me to think that we all possess wealth in a way, and to make it worth its value, it is about how much effort we put into our life. The biggest wealth we have is ourselves.