帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),使其成为完美的作文.Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing.Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.Because she feel very sad.She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!

帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)
以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),使其成为完美的作文.
Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing.Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.Because she feel very sad.She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.
以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?
另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!