改错题: After several publishers had returned the manuscript as unpublishable ,the author no longer knew anyone whom to send it .Many centuries prior the Norman invasion :the Romans have conquered Britain ,and remaind there for almost four centuries .The president mentioned to the cabinet members he was going to negotiate a new treaty with the foreign minister .He was standing quietly when presently a young woman ,who had been combing her hair and watche

改错题: 
After several publishers had returned the manuscript as unpublishable ,the author no longer knew anyone whom to send it .
Many centuries prior the Norman invasion :the Romans have conquered Britain ,and remaind there for almost four centuries .
The president mentioned to the cabinet members he was going to negotiate a new treaty with the foreign minister .
He was standing quietly when presently a young woman ,who had been combing her hair and watched him ,approached and asked him for directions .
Sarah said she heard someone in the attic ,but we didn't find someone .
The prices of homes are very high that most people cannot afford to buy them .
At the next faculty meeting ,some of the proffessors want to discuss about the teaching schedule for the new semester .
Despite the fact that the Southt Pole is as snow-covered and stormy-weathered as the North Pole ,is colder than the North pole .
汉译英:
他虽然很富有却很少帮助穷人.(用as)
我就出生在去年你参观过的那个城市.
我们班的学生比他们班的多.