it makes me very is proud that our country also really into the world这句是否正确这句话中有make和is两个动词,是一种语法还是其它的……请指教这句话出自今年河北省高考满分作文

it makes me very is proud that our country also really into the world这句没有语法，不正确
文法错误， 一个句子有两个动词 makes 和 is

应该是
it makes me very proud of our country that earns a place into the world。

改错：
1. It makes me proud that our country also wins a place in the world.
2. What makes me proud is that our country also wins a place in the world.

①那个，it是错的吧，应该改成what，这样的话就是主语从句
或者去掉is，这样的话，就是it作为形式主语，真正主语是that引导的从句。
②后面的that从句中缺少谓语动词
另外，我想说的是，高考满分作文不代表他一定没有错误。只能说其他地方非常出彩，这个由于长句，难句····引起的错误可以忽略。

无语

后面的is多余了
后面的country also really into the world也不对,缺少动词
厄,这句话如果没引用错误的话,就是出自美国满分作文,也是错的……

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