修改并说明为什么.If I were you.I would hard study if i were you i would look up to eldersi wish you wouldn't sad we are your good friends forever
问题描述：
修改并说明为什么.If I were you.I would hard study if i were you i would look up to elders
i wish you wouldn't sad we are your good friends forever
答
以下引号部分中为改动部分
If I were you.I would “study hard” ...因为hard tudy是名词,这里需要一个动词
I wish you wouldn`t “be” sad “and” we are.因为缺少be动词,后面第二句句子前需要加上连词and