求一篇高二英语作文：Shouid we give more attention to students`s health or grades?

Shouid we give more attention to students`s health or grades?
nowadays the examing stress of students becomes more and more serious ,according to education mode at present.
due to the situation,parents and teachers pay more attention to grates of students and agnoy their health.lack of sports pratice,the body of students become weak and the eye sight deceases.therefore,we should pay more attention to their health that is the basic of study and future lives.do not focus on their grades,remove the stress out of them,although grades are the only way to acheive better education.
above all,please give more attenton to their health without treating them as working machines
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Shouid we give more attention to students`s health or grades?
nowadays the examing stress of students becomes more and more serious ,according to education mode at present.
due to the situation,parents and teachers pay more attention to grates of students and agnoy their health.lack of sports pratice,the body of students become weak and the eye sight deceases.therefore,we should pay more attention to their health that is the basic of study and future lives.do not focus on their grades,remove the stress out of them,although grades are the only way to acheive better education.

Shouid we give more attention to students`s health or grades?nowadays the examing stress of students becomes more and more serious ,according to education mode at present.due to the situation,parents ...