On January first ,I went to the park in the morning.I went shopping in the afternoon这段话有错吗first前加the,还有其他吗

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On January first ,I went to the park in the morning.I went shopping in the afternoon
这段话有错吗
first前加the,还有其他吗

On January the first / 1st, I went to the park in the morning and did some shopping in the afternoon.

第一句话FIRST前应加THE

具体到某天的时候是用ON THE MORNING OF ,泛指“在早上”是用IN THE MORNING.所以1.
and i went shopping on the afternoon.这样比较好,请再指教.