帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.I was a high school student before I come here.Interestingly,I was studying in University only two months.Unluckily,two months are not enough to write an essay at the beginning of the semester.The important thing is I don’t like the course whi

帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!
My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.
I was a high school student before I come here.Interestingly,I was studying in University only two months.Unluckily,two months are not enough to write an essay at the beginning of the semester.The important thing is I don’t like the course which I had chosen before I went to University.
Studying abroad is give me second chance to choose the course again.I also enjoy studying abroad even if it’s a very difficult time.This time will be an important time in my life.It teaches me many things.For example,how to cook food,deal with home stay,teachers and so on.
Now,I’m studying in this city.I chose this school for two respects.First,thsi school has ESL course which is the best language studying in this country.Secondly,this city is such a quiet city which is good for studying and living.So I chose here to study English.This time I’m going to choose jurisprudence if the objective condition allowed.
There is no doubt that all of the dreams require my English skills.For now,I have to pay more attention to my listening and writing.I hope that after this semester,I will not worry about both of them any more.I will also work very hard.