求批我的托福作文~

求批我的托福作文~
Whether students should wear school uniforms,different individuals will have different ideas
due to their background,as for me I strongly vote aganist the idea and my positions will be
substantiated by the following discussions.
To begin with,to wear various kinds of clothes provides teenagers the chances to express
their thoughts and feelings.What they wear can shows what their personalities and tasts
are.A nationwide investigation taken by officials demonstrates that individuals like wearing
red and yellow clothes when they are happy,on the other hand,they tend to wear blue
and black clothes when they are sad.So teachers may have the chances to recognize their
students and even help them.For example,I still remember that it was when I was 15
year-old that I was unhappy because my grandmother was ill.So I worn black clothes for one month.And my teacher noticed it and talked to me.With his help I could free myself from depression.The case is not isolated,it is one of the similar examples I have encountered.In conclusion,wearing different clothes benefits us.
What' more,the clothes students wear can also have impact on their behaviors.Take my
sister Lily as an example.She believes that red T-shirt could bring her luck.So she always
wear red T-shirt when she have an examination.If her school requires all the students wear
the same uniforms,it means that my sisiter may lose her confidence especially when she
have an examination.So we cannot ignore the impact of the clothes.
Last but not the least,they will be happy because they can wear their favorate clothes.So
they will be more energetic and vigorous.They are also engaged in more school activities
and accumulate more wisdom .For example,my sister Lucy,is a schoolgirl.She likes school
because she can freely wear her favorate clothes.She said that she was confident and
exciting when staying at school,for the reason that her classmates like her clothes.As an
outcome,she gets along with her peers.In short we cannot make our children unpleasant .
To sum up,it is not a sound idea that makes children wear the school uniforms,for the
reason that the not only clothes can reveal our feelings,it can affect our behaviors.Also
various clothes make students confident and happy .