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It is very common to see a large number of people doing exercise with their dogs when walking in a park in a nice weather.A pet is important to its owner at times.They are like one of the family members.I believe pets can be of great benefits to their owners than the problems they may lead.
First and foremost,it is believed that keeping pets help to cultivate patience for their owners.To raise a pet involve lots of work,such as mop the floor,vacuum the carpet and clean up pet’s home.Sometimes,pets can be more annoying than children as they can make a room messy and break cups and bowls.All of those hard works may keep some of us away from having a pet at home.Generally speaking,those people who have a pet in their home are more likely to be patient and responsible for what the pets have done.
Another advantage of owning a pet is that it can be a royal companion to its owner.Pets,like dogs and cats,may sit by your side when you are upset.We might talk to the pet any secrets we want without worrying about being known by anyone else.Moreover,some pets enjoy doing exercise everyday,which can be a motivation for the owners to do exercise at the same time.
Last but not least,the rewards that many pets owners get is that they can help to do some sort of work.A good example is some dogs may help with looking after animals in the farm.
On the other hand,pets may also bring about burdens to their owners in terms of financial support and physically assistant they need.They probably give rise to hygienic problems if we do not have time to care for them.
All in all,having a pet at home has more advantages than the downsides they may bring about.They help owners to keep fit as well as bring them happiness.