加一个副词或短语,把and 换掉!
问题描述：
加一个副词或短语,把and 换掉!
I ,undersigned,a senior student of Peking University majoring in business and administration,“and ”I would like to see if it is possible for you to furnish some information.
这是一封询问信的开头,我想把那个带“”的and 换掉,换成“此刻、现在”之类的意思,不要now、at the moment之类的.顺便麻烦高手帮我看下整句话,怎么把它改高级一点,就这个意思.
I ,undersigned,am a senior student of Peking University majoring in business and administration,“and ”I would like to see if it is possible for you to furnish some information.
不好意思，原文是一句话，我少打了一个am,是有and 连接的两个并列分句
答
I,undersigned,a senior student of Peking University majoring in business and administration,therewith,I owe my gratitude to thy favour of informing me about the possibility of furnishing some infromation.
够雅了吧,求职合适吗?