请英文高手帮我看看改改,

请英文高手帮我看看改改,
帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!
Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher,because it’s not just a heavenliness occupation,but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher,so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl.I have lots of interest,such as singing,dancing,drawing and so on.
In my spare time,I love to play the piano,but not good at it.
That's all,thank you for your attention.