这段英文有没有语法毛病?有又在哪里?如果有请改正.

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这段英文有没有语法毛病?有又在哪里?如果有请改正.
One day, a dog and a cat go to the movie,
They passing through an apple tree,the cat say,”do you like apple?”the dog say,’’yes,but you like apple,too.but there is only one apple,how do I?”
Then,the dog and the cat fight.
Finally,the apple fell into the water.

第一行:go 改成went
第二行:passing 改成were passing say 改为saidapple 改成applessay 改为said
第三行:apple改成apples too改为either but去掉 apple后面加treedo改成can
第四行:fight 改成fighted
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