有没有人帮我看一眼我作文里这句话写的对么.

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有没有人帮我看一眼我作文里这句话写的对么.
Demands create the pressure under which efficiency is squeezed out of people's hands and inspiration is forced out of people's brains.有没有语法错误呀

很高兴为你解答.句子没什么大问题.主语是 Demands ,谓语是 create ,宾语是 pressure ,under which 后面引导的都是定语从句修饰 pressure.句子大意:命令产生压力,在这种压力下,效率出来了,灵感也出来了.按照语法,是...谢谢啊,这种复杂句子我又想写又怕错不用谢~ 以后还请多关照。(*^__^*) 嘻嘻~