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Dear Charles:
I know you are worried about Tommy that hehad stolen the shop more than once.You told your parents this matter,but theyask you not to get involved,so you don’t know how to do.
When receiving your letter,I feel sorry toknow that your friend was shoplifting and I am worry about you,whether youcould solve this problem or not.
Personally speaking,I’m not on your parents side.Idon’t think they could doing nothing in this matter,on the contrary,theyshould talk to Tommy’s parents so as to help Tommy of trouble.
I have some advice for you ,and they maybe help youto deal with this matter.First,I think you can talk with Tommy after schooland ask him why he did this thing.Second,if Tommy doesn’t realize hismistake,then you can tell your teacher this thing.Finally,you can ask yourparents to communicate with Tommy’s parents this matter.I think Tommy willbecome well if we help him together.
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亲爱的查尔斯：我知道你担心汤米刚偷来的店不止一次.你告诉你的父母这件事,但问你不参与,所以你不知道如何去做.当收到你的信,我很了解你的朋友是偷窃,我很担心你,是否能解决这个问题或不.就我个人而言,我不在你父母的身边.我不认为他们能在这件事什么也不做,相反,他们应该跟汤米的父母以帮助汤米的麻烦.我有一些建议给你,他们可能帮你处理这件事.首先,我认为你可以在学校和汤米谈问他为什么做这件事.第二,如果汤米不知道hismistake,那么你可以告诉你的老师这件事.最后,你可以问你的父母对这件事有汤米的父母沟通.我认为汤姆会如果我们一起帮助他.