英语改错,急 Thank you for offering me school fees.I really appreciate your kind and genero...

英语改错,急 Thank you for offering me school fees.I really appreciate your kind and genero...
英语改错,急
Thank you for offering me school fees.I really appreciate your kind and generosity .Without your help ,i couldn't enjoy awonderful life in the university .Now iam getting on quite good with my life and studies .I am studying hard to acquire an abundant knowledge of english ,that is my major .I'm making progresses every day .Only by working hard can i help with those in need .What's more ,I've made up mind to go back to my hometown before graduation and devote myself to make it more prosperous and beautify .
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